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Battlecreepers app

Post by Battlecreeper on Sat May 28, 2016 5:16 pm

YOUR NAME: Jennifer Kivas




VAULT USER NAME[Steam Username]: Battlecreeper




VAULT USER ID[Steam ID]: STEAM_0:1:51886123




AGE: 24




DESIRED OCCUPATION[WHY SHOULD YOU BE ACCEPTED?]: I'm good at teaching and have put allmy time upon learning the history of our great country aswell as for the G.O.A.T test I had the best results for a teacher position, for the future of our vault.




WHAT ARE YOU GOOD AT?: Teaching, inspecting, learning, information gathering, conflicting problems with charisma




WHAT COULD YOU BE BETTER AT?:  Strength, patients with stubborn people




ANY MEDICAL CONDITIONS?: Nearsighted (Glasses for hose who dont know it)




DO YOU UNDERSTAND THE OVERSEER'S WORD IS LAW AND WILL ALWAYS REMAIN SO?: Yes




TELL US SOMETHING ABOUT OUR GREAT COUNTRY!: The united state of america have been constructing a new way of defeating the red chinese communist wich is the all mighty power armor. The one and only super armor of the US state. It was planned to expand it the n more of a military usage in the police force as riot control units.




YOU DO UNDERSTAND YOUR VAULT MEMBERSHIP[Character] CAN BE REMOVED AT ANY TIME CORRECT?: Yes




CURRENT EQUIPMENT: Vault jumpsuit, pencile (Can be fucking dangerouse don't understimate that), long range glasses.




BACKSTORY[1-2 Paragraphs MINIMUM 10-20 Sentences]:








Jennifer was born within the vualt of course. Within her childhood she was showing of signs of attacing great interest with other kids upon her own knowledge she has learned from her teacher wich she storaged together within her memory as not all children were lissening during class she talked about the talked about topics in the class in the free time. Her time was spend most liekly to ask for permission of any historical books, information about the history, books that involve the old US soceity and culture, the govermental structure, vault-tec, and of course informationoutside the vault wich she never got. As a teenage, she was rather alone, thou able when entering in a conversasstion of a group of people in their topic. Since it was the vault she knew the people easily around, and the yknew her. She was a curiouse young woman, and still. As she was prepared for the G.O.A.T. test she passed it with the highest score of the teacher position. With her great knowledge that the teacher of course knew she putted effort into it made her a perfect canidate to take over the teacher position. AFter all, who dosent want to teach the next generation of the vault ?


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Re: Battlecreepers app

Post by Pianotugboat on Wed Jul 20, 2016 1:11 pm

Did you take. Any time writing this app. Because there are so many spelling errors. Let alone the fact that the G.O.A.T was directly mentioned to of just been a shamble of numbers and guessing. No matter your score. I had a true difficulty reading this application for the lack of effort in it. And the story also was simple, she was born. She saw passion, she took test. She became teacher. Not engaging at all, go and rewrite it.
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